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try not to take any of this the wrong way, it's just an honest critique.
your lighting, as always is superb, though, that one behind the top model is a bit odd... i'd rather see a bit of halo showing her curves than that hot-spot (combined with the dark dress/background combo) that blinds us from seeing much of her.
the poses however, i find basic at best, awkward at worst. the top model certainly looks, um, uncomfortable. the composition also, on both is a bit boring.
honestly, i really like your photos that take something a bit ugly and make it interesting or beautiful. the chick photos are usually a bit **-hum.
The light that looks like a star burst effect or whatever looks tacky. >_<"
The 2nd model looks like she has no neck. I like the lightning in the 2nd photo though.
Models posing at an abandoned warehouse... sexy? I guess... The solar shine just looks out of place and a little tacky. It's best to learn subtlety in your designs layering small elements than just one big one. It's also too contrasty and doesn't look at all realistic nor does it blend in, in anyway. Try to expand your skillset w/o relying on cheap filters, you'll become a better designer in the long run.