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As the subject says. Project is due by Tuesday and just started working on it. Can only be black and white. Theme is Patriot: A Publishing Company.

Thoughts?

Thanks!

Leland
 
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Third one down, first one. Clean, not to busy, and remains with the theme. Classic and elegant.

Just my $0.02.

Good luck.
 
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"Publishing" is longer than "Patriot", so the ones that read left to right look lopsided. Patriot on top, publishing on bottom looks much more balanced.
 
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The different tracking of "Patriot" and "Publishing" looks awkward and unbalanced. "Patriot" is nice and spaced out but "Publishing" looks like it's been squished in so it will fit.

I would try a variant of the 3rd one down on the left where you would make the type sit on the right hand side of the graphic ("Patriot" on top of "Publishing") and make the tracking the same for both words - I would go somewhere in between the two different ones you have now.
 
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Thank you for insight and suggestions. Much appreciated! :)
 

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I like the 2nd one..the cursive text give it a little old world charm.and fits wit the Patriot name and the image you've chosen..

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