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<blockquote data-quote="rs2sensen" data-source="post: 383076" data-attributes="member: 10090"><p>Looks pretty good overall, you definitely have a good start. A lot of the suggestions above are good, but be careful to maintain your own personal style with the advertisement. I've been in design for quite some time, and I think that some of the worst work I've seen has been from people who recently have gotten out of some form of design classes (recently as in within the past 5 years). In a design class, they teach you certain rules to follow. At some point, we realize the design rules only take away from style, originality, and art. There is a time to break the rules, and in some ways, I think you can be allowed to do that. </p><p></p><p>Here's one rule I wouldn't break, in this case... Overall, your text isn't bad, but it can be much better. Whenever I do an advertisement, you want to incorporate the design around your contact information, be it a phone number, email address, or website address. I think the web address in your site needs to be considerably larger. Try putting the website in different places on the design, and then increase it's size 10fold. The rest...that all falls together on its own.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="rs2sensen, post: 383076, member: 10090"] Looks pretty good overall, you definitely have a good start. A lot of the suggestions above are good, but be careful to maintain your own personal style with the advertisement. I've been in design for quite some time, and I think that some of the worst work I've seen has been from people who recently have gotten out of some form of design classes (recently as in within the past 5 years). In a design class, they teach you certain rules to follow. At some point, we realize the design rules only take away from style, originality, and art. There is a time to break the rules, and in some ways, I think you can be allowed to do that. Here's one rule I wouldn't break, in this case... Overall, your text isn't bad, but it can be much better. Whenever I do an advertisement, you want to incorporate the design around your contact information, be it a phone number, email address, or website address. I think the web address in your site needs to be considerably larger. Try putting the website in different places on the design, and then increase it's size 10fold. The rest...that all falls together on its own. [/QUOTE]
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