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<blockquote data-quote="chicago" data-source="post: 382635" data-attributes="member: 23494">The ad is too loose. You're missing detail in your illustration. For instance... the frame around &quot;Lan Party&quot; isn't defined enough. You're going for a 3D appearance yet you're missing some of the detail to complete it. Pay more attention to your light source. How is the light going to affect the shading on the surfaces of the frame?So is there going to be a band there? If not.. what's the purpose of the guitar?Do you guys play the same games at every one of your lan parties? If not, then perhaps putting what games will played on the poster will help draw the right crowd. Your typography isn't working with the illustration. It looks like someone is just throwing it in. It specifically looks like the illustration was printed first then someone later came along and put some copy on it through word and their laser printer. The &quot;LAN PARTY&quot; bothers me. It's because LAN is soooo loose on the tracking/kerning. L&nbsp;&nbsp; A&nbsp;&nbsp; N&nbsp; bothers me immensely. But, for your purpose... it'll probably work for what you're wanting it to if you are just wanting to attract those who normally go to the party. But, if you're wanting non-goers to come, you'll need to make it more interesting and step it up.</blockquote>

[QUOTE="chicago, post: 382635, member: 23494"] The ad is too loose. You're missing detail in your illustration. For instance... the frame around "Lan Party" isn't defined enough. You're going for a 3D appearance yet you're missing some of the detail to complete it. Pay more attention to your light source. How is the light going to affect the shading on the surfaces of the frame? So is there going to be a band there? If not.. what's the purpose of the guitar? Do you guys play the same games at every one of your lan parties? If not, then perhaps putting what games will played on the poster will help draw the right crowd. Your typography isn't working with the illustration. It looks like someone is just throwing it in. It specifically looks like the illustration was printed first then someone later came along and put some copy on it through word and their laser printer. The "LAN PARTY" bothers me. It's because LAN is soooo loose on the tracking/kerning. L A N bothers me immensely. But, for your purpose... it'll probably work for what you're wanting it to if you are just wanting to attract those who normally go to the party. But, if you're wanting non-goers to come, you'll need to make it more interesting and step it up. [/QUOTE]

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