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I have done a search for this topic but have not found any.

I am interested in your poems and Prose

Here are a couple of mine that were published a while back:

THIS CHILD WITHIN

The child who used to
Laugh and run
Lost she's lost
Through the mists of time...

Walks now a woman
In the sun
Yes she may come again
But never twice the same...



THIS WOMAN WITHIN

she had an instinctive sensitivity
for the feelings of other
she was bright and cheerful

mature innocence sees
the world as a source of infinite surprise
and the fall of a sparrow is deemed
as important as the death of king or prince
such was her innocence

do not think of her as a fey-do-gooder
with pale blood and aspirations to sanctity
her blood was red her tears were wet
her laughter was loud she dreamed
of fine princes and believed in fairy tales

her heart was in the here and now for those
who could see her passions were palpable
she was down to earth but not of the earth
she was a woman of aire and fire...
 
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Oh man, I love poetry. I've written some myself and I have a few favorites from other authors that I'd like to post. :D I have to look for them first :D
 
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I've always wanted to be able to write, but I can't. I am so bad at everything english and nothing is ever right. I give ideas to writers and they fix it for me. I guess thats the good thing about my major (film) you don't have to do all the work your self. Theres somebody to take your ideas and help you put them on paper.
 
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I posted a poem on a forum
In the hope that my words wouldn't bore 'em
I was eager to please
but I filled it with sleaze
and was duly banned by the quorum

:D
 
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This is from a while ago. Not much for poetry, but this one of my few attempts:

What can be said of the human heart?
For it's frailty? For it's utter lack of wisdom?
For it's unending quest for companionship?
For it's blind acceptance of it's counterparts?
What can be said for an organ which exposes itself for all to see?
Who bears all it's secrets with no regard to it's weaknesses?
What can be said of the human heart?
At least he's far braver than I...
 
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I see out these eyes
alone, looking from this shell
never to know life
 

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i haven't really written in ages.

i've got a few old things around somewhere, maybe i'll post them.

in the mean time, why not haiku?


the clock ticks slowly
eternity, boredom, *sigh*
shift is not over
 
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Please don't laugh :)

I wrote this one as a teen. I haven't written any for a long time! Some one my fav. are Pable Neruda and e e cummings

Deep Inside

The stars and sand
You and me holding hands
An exhilarating feeling that fills the soul
wishing that this moment would last forever and more

The wind blowing in my hair
Your soft touches everywhere
Feeling your heart next to mine
hoping that something could stop the time

The darkness of an elegant night
made every moment and feeling just right
Exposing the love, forever and true,
This and more I have for you

Hazel are my stars that I see
Never too far from me
They twinkle when I spot them
and smile because they are not forgotten

What is this warm sensation?
It fills my heart, my mind and soul
with a feeling I will never know.
 
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the clock ticks slowly
eternity, boredom, *sigh*
shift is not over

For some reason, I'm reminded of

Fight Club said:
worker bees can leave
even drones can fly away
the queen is their slave
 
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Some of my Fav's:

Walk slowly

If you should
go before me, dear, walk slowly
Down the ways of death, well worn and wide,
For I would want to overtake you quickly
And seek the journey's ending by your side.

I would be so forlorn not to descry you
Down some shining highroad when I came
Walk slowly; dear, and often look behind you
And pause to hear if someone calls your name.

Adelaide love


Light

The night has a thousand eyes,
The day but one;
And the light of the whole world dies
With the dying sun.
The mind has a thousand eyes,
And the heart but one;
And the light of a whole life dies,
When its love is done.

Francis w. Bordillon


Midsummer

You loved me for a little
Who could not love me long;
You gave me wings of gladness
And lent my spirit song.

You loved me for an hour
But only with your eyes;
Your lips I could not capture
By storm or by surprise.

Your mouth that I remember
With rush of sudden pain;
As one remembers starlight
Or roses after rain...

Out of a world of laughter
Suddenly I am sad...
Day and night it haunts me,
The kiss I never had.

Sydney king Russell


Vases

Two vases stood on the shelf of life
As love came by to look,
One was of priceless cloisonné',
The other of solid common clay.
Which do you think love took?

He took them both from the shelf of life,
He took them both with a smile;
He clasped them both with his finger tips,
And touched them both with caressing lips,
And held them both for awhile.

From tired hands love let them fall,
And never a word was spoken.
One was of priceless cloisonné',
The other of solid common clay.
Which do you think was broken?

Nan Terrell Reed


A mile with me

O who will walk a mile with me
Along lives merry way?
A comrade blithe and full of glee,
Who dares to laugh out loud and free,
And let his frolic fancy play,
Like a happy child, through the flowers gay
That fill the field and fringe the way
Where he walks a mile with me
And who will walk a mile with me
Along life’s weary way?
A friend whose heart has eyes to see
The stars shine out o'er the darkening lea,
And the quiet read at the end of the day,--
A friend who knows, and dares to say,
The brave sweet words that cheer the way
Where he walks a mile with me.
With such a comrade, such a friend,
I fain would walk to journeys end,
Through summer sunshine, winter rain,
And then?--farewell, we shall meet again!

Henry van dyke


Love paid me a visit

Love paid me a visit.
It had your face,
And it wore your sweet smile.
Love paid me a visit.
It made me feel wanted, needed, desired.
Loves hand felt warm in mine,
And when I squeezed it, it squeezed back.
Love filled me, thrilled me, and
Overwhelmed me.
Love paid me a visit.
And love stayed.

Unknown


The Bridge Builder

An old man, going a lone highway,
Came at the evening, cold and gray,
To a chasm, vast and deep and wide,
Through which was flowing a sullen tide.
The old man crossed in the twilight dim--
That sullen stream had no fears for him;
But he turned when he reached the other side,
And built a bridge to span the tide.

"old man" said a fellow pilgrim near,
"you are wasting strength in building here.
Your journey will end with the ending day;
You never again must pass this way.
You have crossed the chasm deep and wide,
Why build you a bridge at the eventide?"

The builder lifted his old gray head.
"good friend, in the path i have come,” he said,
"there followeth after me today
A youth whose feet must pass this way.
This chasm that has been naught for me
To that fair-haired youth may a pitfall be.

He, too, must cross in the twilight dim;
Good friend, i am building the bridge for him."


Will Allen Dromgoole
 

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wow, a peek into baggss' heart...

good picks my friend.


and since i'm here:

alert on the screen
what now my windows server?
will you need a boot?


gotta love the haiku, and i'm at work, so...
 
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Baggs, that was an excellent selection of poetry. I'm particularly fond of the last one. Thanks for sharing those.
 
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3 more of my Fav's:


-The Tiger-

Tiger! Tiger! Burning bright
In the forests of the night;
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?

In what distant deeps or skies
Burned the fire of thin eyes?
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?

And what shoulder, and what art,
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
And when thy heart began to beat,
What dread hand? What dread feet?

What the hammer, what the chain?
In what furnace was thy brain?
What the anvil? What dread grasp
Dare its deadly terrors clasp?

When the stars threw down their spears,
And watered heaven with their tears,
Did he smile his work to see?
Did he, who made the lamb, make thee!

Tiger! Tiger! Burning bright,
In the forest of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?

-William Blake-


The Walrus and The Carpenter

The sun was shining on the sea,
Shining with all his might,
He did his very best to make
The billows smooth and bright--
And this was odd, because it was
The middle of the night.

The moon was shining sulkily,
Because she thought the sun
Had got no business to be there
After the day was done--
It's very rude of him, she said,
To come and spoil the fun!

The sea was wet as wet could be,
The sand was dry as dry.
You could not see a cloud, because
No cloud was in the sky:
No birds were flying overhead,
There were no birds to fly.

The walrus and the carpenter
Were walking close at hand:
They wept like anything to see
Such quantities of sand:
If this were only cleared away,
They said, it really would be grand!

If seven maids with sweeping mops
Swept it for half a year,
Do you suppose, the walrus said,
That they could get it clear?
I doubt it, said the carpenter,
And shed a bitter tear.

O oyster come and walk with us!
The walrus did beseech.
A pleasant walk, a pleasant talk,
Along the briny beach:
We cannot do with more than four,
To give a hand to each.
The eldest oyster looked at him,
But never a word he said:
The eldest oyster winked his eye,
And shook his heavy head---
Meaning to say he did not choose
To leave the oyster-bed.
but four young oysters hurried up,
All eager for the treat:
Their coats were brushed, their faces washed,
Their shoes were clean and neat--
And this was odd, because, you know
They hadn't any feet.

Four other oysters followed them,
And yet another four;
And thick and fast they came at last,
And more, and more, and more--
All hopping through the frothy waves,
And scrambling to the shore.

The walrus and the carpenter
Walked on a mile or so,
And the they rested on a rock
Conveniently low:
And all the little oysters stood
And waited in a row.

The time has come, the walrus said,
To talk of many things:
Of shoes--and ships--and sealing wax--
Of cabbages--and kings--
And why the sea is boiling hot--
And whether pigs have wings.

But wait a bit, the oysters cried,
Before we have our chat;
For some of us are out of breath,
And all of us are fat!
No hurry, said the carpenter,
They all thanked him much for that.

A loaf of bread, the walrus said,
Is what we chiefly need:
Pepper and vinegar besides
Are very good indeed--
Now if your ready, oysters dear,
We can begin to feed.

But not on us, the oysters cried,
Turning a little blue.
After such kindness, that would be
A dismal thing to do!
The night is fine, the walrus said.
Do you admire the view?

It was so kind of you to come!
And you are very nice!
The carpenter said nothing but
Cut us another slice.
I wish you were not quite so deaf--
I've had to ask you twice!
It seems a shame, the walrus said,
To play them such a trick.
After we've brought them out so far,
And made them trot so quick!
The carpenter said nothing but
The butters spread to thick!

I weep for you, the walrus said:
I deeply sympathize.
With sobs and tears he sorted our
Those of the largest size,
Holding his pocket handkerchief
Before his streaming eyes.

O oysters, said the carpenter,
You've had a pleasant run!
Shall we be trotting home again?
But answer came there none--
And this was scarcely odd, because
They'd eaten everyone.

-Lewis Carroll-



To A Poet A Thousand Years Hence

I who am dead a thousand years,
And wrote this sweet archaic song,
Send you my words for messengers
The way i shall not pass along.

I care not if you bridge the seas,
Or ride secure the cruel sky,
Or build commutate palaces
Of metal or of masonry.

But have you wine and music still,
And statues and bright eyed love,
And foolish thoughts of good and ill?
And prayers to them who sit above?

How shall we conquer? Like a wind
That falls at eve our fancies blow,
As old maeonides the blind
Said three thousand years ago.

O friend unseen, unborn, unknown,
Student of our sweet English tongue,
Read out my word at night, alone:
I was a poet, i was young!

Since I can never see your face,
And never shake you by the hand,
I send my soul through time and space

To greet you, you will understand.

James Elroy Flecker
 
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The first two, I am exceedingly familiar with as they both fall into my personal favorites. The last one is new to me, but equally spectacular.
 
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Here's some random stuff that I've written over the years. There's also a link to Finnish stuff but I doubt they'll be of any use unless you understand Finnish.

Anyway.. here's the linky
 
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I like the poems already here. They're pretty good.

***********************

And here's one I wrote a little while ago.


Is happiness free for all in this modern world
When everything held so dear is so far away
But distance has lost it's sting over the years
And conquering it has become a bittersweet victory
There's a world of people at your fingertips
Millions of potential friends, happiness from almost anywhere
But it's like faith, do you trust what you can not see
Can those words deceive a pure heart
Far away or right beside you, people are always the same
Will someone see the amazing person you are
By saying "I really do care for you"

There is a lack of trust in the modern world
Where every second word is always censored
Does a lack of security define our culture
When kind words are pushed aside
Unlike the past where love was sincere
And no one questioned the motives being used
To secure your life from potential heartbreak
Is like saying no, it's to risky feeling love
So I'm stopped from saying "I really do care for you"

Who is time, where did it come from
Is it the enemy against you every day
Aging you, and sapping your strength day by day
Knowing that you'll never win, as death comes to us all eventually
The future is quite bleak, by accepting this fate
But the end is not near, if time is your friend
A companion on this journey called life
Sharing it's wisdom and happiness along the way
And the memories we look back on are with the friends we have
So do you want to turn back time to live the perfect life
Or take that risk, and just be yourself
And say "I really do care for you"

So I shall send you this little letter as a test,
To see if this art of communication is not lost
These modern times, so busy thinking about tomorrow
And forgetting about the wonder that is today
To be happy for what you have
The friends that care for you
The love someone feels for you
So when it's said, the future is tomorrow,
Look around and say no
It starts right now by saying "I really do care for you".
 
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Civil; subtle; knew it was an act; lets talk about; am I holding you in astrology; unit: nasty; hey can I ask; let me ask per month; submiss Miss Harrow Irwin; and I mean it; nasty writ; insolvent writ; and then I heard; and I thought: he is inaugurified within him; so I was left to be a thousand years; It was certainly given as an ephod to me since neither it fit; tamit. this is my number three scarab; here's one that covers vishnu

cosmic stick; the sticks will have fastened exactly.

who on earth still are hanging out with the enemy; yeah yeah; the red one; deserve me.

see how he competes indivisible

(Indivisible is not found in the "Look Up in Dictionary" dictionary. Divisible is found; get that word back into the Dictionary as soon as possible thank you very much.)

How many words are being taken out... I'm appalled. Fix it and I'll applaud. I shall laud; is this odd?... No it's... it's perfectly normal, read it again if you're not sure. everything on time as per schedule.
 
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oh yeah, um... has anyone seen the rest of that one... somewhere on the net or anywhere... i might not be quoting it perfectly

i missed the parts about the young monkey-men, and the new york nuke mutant, who had the most deviant feet.

It was taken from an interpretation of a sound file running in reverse. The file was about a half hour long intense conversation forwards, but in reverse, there was more than five minute span of a mostly audible conversation between two people. Incidentally, forwards, the file was of two people talking, not listening to each other , interrupting each other, overlapping each other ignoring and off topic, but backwards, it was two very different people talking about a similar topic, but going more in-depth.
more cutting, and the conversation part i cant remember
It was an awesome possum blossom.

It was at reversespeech.com or somewhereto do with reversespeech.com I've heard nothing so silly-awesome since....
 

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