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<blockquote data-quote="dtownley1" data-source="post: 297938" data-attributes="member: 20564"><p>the first is the nicest. I'd try it without the outer glow though. Some of the best typography you'll ever see in designs is carefully placed and carefully spaced type. Effects just try to frill it up, and it's easy to go overboard.</p><p></p><p>The reason I believe the first version is the best is because it's the cleanest. The coloured arrows have some slight problems with the edge pixels - they could be crisper. Aside from that, it's a solid design. The others become a little too hard to read, or too busy. </p><p></p><p>I think the 2nd version would work much better without the outer glow - as the glow becomes muddy over the black, and it's a little hard to read. Nice, crisp text would look much nicer <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /></p><p></p><p>One final thought. Are the hexagonal shapes just a graphic, or an actual logo? If they form a logo, I'd shrink it down a little so that both it and the text work together. Overall, pretty nice work. Nice colours, good shapes and creative ideas.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="dtownley1, post: 297938, member: 20564"] the first is the nicest. I'd try it without the outer glow though. Some of the best typography you'll ever see in designs is carefully placed and carefully spaced type. Effects just try to frill it up, and it's easy to go overboard. The reason I believe the first version is the best is because it's the cleanest. The coloured arrows have some slight problems with the edge pixels - they could be crisper. Aside from that, it's a solid design. The others become a little too hard to read, or too busy. I think the 2nd version would work much better without the outer glow - as the glow becomes muddy over the black, and it's a little hard to read. Nice, crisp text would look much nicer ;) One final thought. Are the hexagonal shapes just a graphic, or an actual logo? If they form a logo, I'd shrink it down a little so that both it and the text work together. Overall, pretty nice work. Nice colours, good shapes and creative ideas. [/QUOTE]
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