Forums
New posts
Articles
Product Reviews
Policies
FAQ
Log in
Register
What's new
Search
Search
Search titles only
By:
New posts
Menu
Log in
Register
Install the app
Install
Forums
Digital Lifestyle
Images, Graphic Design, and Digital Photography
Smoking Poster
JavaScript is disabled. For a better experience, please enable JavaScript in your browser before proceeding.
You are using an out of date browser. It may not display this or other websites correctly.
You should upgrade or use an
alternative browser
.
Reply to thread
Message
<blockquote data-quote="CrimsonRequiem" data-source="post: 841138" data-attributes="member: 62286"><p>Okay time to be super nit picking. >_<"</p><p></p><p>You need to resolve the color scheme it's not working. </p><p></p><p><strong>No stroking the type please.</strong></p><p></p><p>Not sure what's going on with the lady's hair towards the back it looks like she got a bad haircut.</p><p></p><p>Pick typefaces that have been time tested for readability, especially since this is for a poster.</p><p></p><p>Why are there flames shooting out of her shoulder? I know that's not what you want. Move things around so it doesn't look like that.</p><p></p><p>The white slashes is not working. They are taking away from everything else. Tone them down...the background is not suppose to be more important than the foreground and the typography.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="CrimsonRequiem, post: 841138, member: 62286"] Okay time to be super nit picking. >_<" You need to resolve the color scheme it's not working. [B]No stroking the type please.[/B] Not sure what's going on with the lady's hair towards the back it looks like she got a bad haircut. Pick typefaces that have been time tested for readability, especially since this is for a poster. Why are there flames shooting out of her shoulder? I know that's not what you want. Move things around so it doesn't look like that. The white slashes is not working. They are taking away from everything else. Tone them down...the background is not suppose to be more important than the foreground and the typography. [/QUOTE]
Verification
Post reply
Forums
Digital Lifestyle
Images, Graphic Design, and Digital Photography
Smoking Poster
Top