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Poster for school, need some opinions
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<blockquote data-quote="Brown Study" data-source="post: 611839" data-attributes="member: 3889"><p>Looks pretty good. But you've used a run-on sentence employing a <a href="http://www.reference.com/search?q=comma%20splice" target="_blank"><strong>comma splice</strong></a>: There should be a period after "talent" and "from" should be "From."</p><p></p><p>Also, "the fine art" should be "the fine arts," unless the school teaches only one, in which case it should be named instead of being called "the fine art."</p><p></p><p><strong>Edit:</strong> Digital Art has both words capitalized, but Traditional art doesn't. Make it Digital art, or you'll have to capitalize all of them to maintain consistency.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="Brown Study, post: 611839, member: 3889"] Looks pretty good. But you've used a run-on sentence employing a [URL="http://www.reference.com/search?q=comma%20splice"][B]comma splice[/B][/URL]: There should be a period after "talent" and "from" should be "From." Also, "the fine art" should be "the fine arts," unless the school teaches only one, in which case it should be named instead of being called "the fine art." [B]Edit:[/B] Digital Art has both words capitalized, but Traditional art doesn't. Make it Digital art, or you'll have to capitalize all of them to maintain consistency. [/QUOTE]
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