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<blockquote data-quote="EGGO" data-source="post: 644858" data-attributes="member: 48866"><p>You need to work on your typography skills. <a href="http://bp3.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBYyHwekV8I/AAAAAAAAABs/y7eEadTVP_M/s1600-h/starlight-talent-show-poster-web.jpg" target="_blank">http://bp3.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBYyHwekV8I/AAAAAAAAABs/y7eEadTVP_M/s1600-h/starlight-talent-show-poster-web.jpg</a> the body copy needs to be tweaked, the headline should go through some major kerning and overall in almost all of your pieces, you should try different font families.</p><p></p><p><a href="http://bp1.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBXUkgekV5I/AAAAAAAAABU/RFTurgXYtPY/s1600-h/typog-attempt1-web.jpg" target="_blank">http://bp1.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBXUkgekV5I/AAAAAAAAABU/RFTurgXYtPY/s1600-h/typog-attempt1-web.jpg</a></p><p>In this, I would've put the quotation marks right next to the body to create a better sense of balance and do something about how you did the layout there as it feels really bottom-heavy. Again, typography needs total revamping, as does anything I'm seeing that has copy.</p><p></p><p>Color-wise? Sure, it looks neat, but that's about it. Why were the colors chosen? What kind of atmosphere were you trying to get? I don't quite understand your personality being shown through these.</p><p></p><p>This is all coming from an art-director and copywriter.</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="EGGO, post: 644858, member: 48866"] You need to work on your typography skills. [url]http://bp3.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBYyHwekV8I/AAAAAAAAABs/y7eEadTVP_M/s1600-h/starlight-talent-show-poster-web.jpg[/url] the body copy needs to be tweaked, the headline should go through some major kerning and overall in almost all of your pieces, you should try different font families. [url]http://bp1.blogger.com/_01U6YtS4rng/SBXUkgekV5I/AAAAAAAAABU/RFTurgXYtPY/s1600-h/typog-attempt1-web.jpg[/url] In this, I would've put the quotation marks right next to the body to create a better sense of balance and do something about how you did the layout there as it feels really bottom-heavy. Again, typography needs total revamping, as does anything I'm seeing that has copy. Color-wise? Sure, it looks neat, but that's about it. Why were the colors chosen? What kind of atmosphere were you trying to get? I don't quite understand your personality being shown through these. This is all coming from an art-director and copywriter. [/QUOTE]
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