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<blockquote data-quote="scathe" data-source="post: 829675" data-attributes="member: 81672"><p>Nice work, I really like it</p><p></p><p>for some feedback:</p><p>in the first posted layout, I would go with what mcjacksonnelson suggested, but in the Graphic Times title, specifically the "Graphic" word, you have a stroke on the P, use something similar on the G .... it's just a thought, I think the title should stand out more ... btw I really like how you handled the CMYK theme <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /></p><p></p><p>as for the second layout, only one thing bothers me and that's how the whole paragraph starting with IT is pushed way to the top, but you would probably have to edit the text itself</p><p></p><p>now these are just to provide some feedback, overall I think you did a very good job</p><p></p><p>Edit:</p><p>you really like that lambo picture don't you? <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" /> in your photo shoot thread I mentioned the garage being a bad background, but here it blends in, nice</p></blockquote><p></p>
[QUOTE="scathe, post: 829675, member: 81672"] Nice work, I really like it for some feedback: in the first posted layout, I would go with what mcjacksonnelson suggested, but in the Graphic Times title, specifically the "Graphic" word, you have a stroke on the P, use something similar on the G .... it's just a thought, I think the title should stand out more ... btw I really like how you handled the CMYK theme :) as for the second layout, only one thing bothers me and that's how the whole paragraph starting with IT is pushed way to the top, but you would probably have to edit the text itself now these are just to provide some feedback, overall I think you did a very good job Edit: you really like that lambo picture don't you? :) in your photo shoot thread I mentioned the garage being a bad background, but here it blends in, nice [/QUOTE]
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