GarageBand for the amateur - Looking for advice

Hello,

I'm here to get some feedback about my homemade songs all done with GarageBand.

Here's 2 songs I put on Youtube recently :

http://youtu.be/1BzMouW3xFM

http://youtu.be/TM9epImIbTs

It may sounds electronic, but the music was all done with an iPad. It becomes a useful tool for me when a melody comes into my mind and i'm not at home.

Could you tell me what you think of it, please?
Do the lyrics make sense?

Thanks by advance.

(Sorry about my french accent, I'm working on it)

Nono.

I liked it! Kinda reminded me of The Nits (from Holland). It's obviously not a studio production but it really gets the point and melody across just fine. Excellent use of backing vocals.

Thank you for your comment!

Is the meaning of the song clear to an english listener?

Maybe You Don't Care - Song Created With GarageBand (With vocals)

Hello,

here's a new song I wish I could have some feedback on :

Never Get Older - GarageBand HomeMade Song + Voices Mix - YouTube

I've tried to create harmonies just with my voice (and a piano to stay tuned).

Sorry for the french accent.

Thanks by advance for your comments.

Nono.

Please do not start a new thread when the subject is the same. Just continue with the same thread instead. Threads have been merged.

The wording of the lyrics was occasionally a little unusual (for a native English speaker) but the meaning was clear.

Very nice. Se the tip about singers in bikinis?

harryb2448 said:

Very nice. Se the tip about singers in bikinis?

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Yes, this is project I have in mind

It must be the best way to get attention on the internet.

There is little doubt you are right, retro!!!

And the sound AND vision : Never Get Older (Homemade Song - Stop Motion)) - YouTube

Hardlythe song I needed on 75th birthday lol but very nice and hot gfx.

Gotta say not bad at all. I never really got into GB, but it keeps amazing me the quality that people keep coming up with, and reminds me every time, what a powerful tool it real is.
Keep it up, you seem to be on the right track

TattooedMac said:

Gotta say not bad at all. I never really got into GB, but it keeps amazing me the quality that people keep coming up with, and reminds me every time, what a powerful tool it real is.
Keep it up, you seem to be on the right track

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Thank you, are you talking about the song with the video?

GB had an update recently, it seems so different now.

Here's a new song : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZ-gHHe-hck

The music is half made on the ipad and I added the guitar later on garageband osx.

What do you think of the quality?

Thank you.

Nono.

Hey!

Here's a new song done with GarageBand : Like a tear in the rain (GarageBand Homemade Song) - YouTube

GarageBand seems to have no limit for what I'm doing. Still amazed by the quality of this free tool!

Thank you,

Nono.

Maybe You Don't Care - Song Created With GarageBand (With vocals)

Hi again,

I'm sorry, but it seems I cannot modified my last topic so I've created this new one.

It's been 6 months now, and I continue learning all the possibilities about GarageBand which I think is an incredible tool for the amateur. I've got of lot of help from other users on internet and have made a dozen songs with this software.

I would like to know if this seems to get closer, in recording quality, to current standard.
Does it?

Are there other GarageBand users that could give some advice to make it better?

Funky little one, don't be afraid by the little dancer!
Heart On Fire (GarageBand Funky Song - Amazing Tool) - YouTube

Soul ballad with a little electro chorus
http://youtu.be/VRhBeQEs_MI

Funk rock with a lot of backing vocal
http://youtu.be/8WUrUnrUTjc

Thanks a lot in advance!

Nono.

Once more.... Do not start a new thread. I merged your post to your original thread. If you wish to continue posting to this thread about music you create, then make a note of the thread and bookmark it so you can get back to it.

I understand but I couldn't edit the first post and subject which is a little out of date now, could you give me the possibility to change the first post? I think it might be misleading for users that only read the first post. Thank you!

What do you want the new title to say?