New holiday flyer, opinions?

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Hello,

Just designed a new flyer to try and attract more business. Thoughts?

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Its festive and I like it.
 

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Seems interesting although I wonder if you really need all that background? Especially when all your information is crammed into that little tag.

Where the string goes through the red circle...shouldn't that be the same color as the background and not stark white?

I would also reconsider some of the color choices for your ornaments, just for consistency. Some of the colors kind of come out of no where...if you are going for that muted color in the background and the dark green on the ribbon.

Trying switch the red color on the tag with the color of your font. That might make it more eye catching.
 

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