Senior portfolio, what do you think?

Well here is a screenshot of my senior portfolio which is a requirement for me to graduate. So what do you think? I was trying to go for more of a minimal contemporary look.

http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/3738/picture3lmq.png




Also please ignore the grey bar around it,

Sorry I'm nit picking. >_>" I don't like how the R and the T is butting up against each other. You need to use more or less tracking.

CrimsonRequiem said:

Sorry I'm nit picking. >_>" I don't like how the R and the T is butting up against each other. You need to use more or less tracking.

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No need to apologize, I expect some nit picking

maybe make the green a lil brighter, you want it to be the first thing you see.. and right now it is not, at least for me. crimson doesn't like the R and T i noticed the T and F butting first though ..

Uhm it's not tracking it's kerning and yea you need to adjust it between the letters individually not just the whole word. If you wan the letters to touch they all need to touch.

of course you need to fix your tracking too!