Hey everybody!

I've been posting on and off here for a few months now and I've just recently started to get into creating rap music.

I want some input on these songs from someone other than my friends because I feel their criticism isn't direct enough because a lot of them don't produce music themselves. Constructive criticism only please, but don't be afraid to be harsh as long as it's not something to the tune of "song x sucks" with no reasoning.

The link to my MySpace Music page is in my profile. Thanks!

EDIT: I figured since this was a request for review/critique that it'd be more appropriate for Anything Goes than the Music forum.