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Magazine ad i am working on for a school project. What do you think?

ALSO: Please ignore the tag line "Beauty etc.." for now since i am going to replace it once i finish coming up with something better, and yes i know existence is spelled wrong.


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very cool, my only critique is of the green hands... Due to the color it's very distracting, but then again maybe that's what you're going for. Either way it's a great design
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I think that it's great design for a magazine advertisement.

You brushed pretty much perfectly.

But here are the things that I think could be changed, but it's only my opinion:

-The green hands. I also feel that they don't "flow" with the color scheme going on.
-Some of the splatter brushing is a tad dirty. Meaning there are small splats that could be cleaned up a little on certain areas, like the top area of the twirl brushing. Right in the middle there are two | like lines that I think could go.
-The font for the website link doesn't exactly flow with the other font's used, so maybe use a different one that isn't hard to read either.

Other than that, I think it's great.

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When did VoodooPC start selling computers at Target?


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When did VoodooPC start selling computers at Target?
What gave you the impression? lol
Well pretty much i agree with the distraction of the hands in the center, ill see if i can remove it, it has to flow first with the rest of my group working with me since it is a group project, but they want creative input and credit doing no designing work , at least they can write the articles. Ill be making the modifications.
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