Thread: I am trying this again.
05-30-2008, 12:00 AM #1
05-30-2008, 12:33 AM #2
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very cool, my only critique is of the green hands... Due to the color it's very distracting, but then again maybe that's what you're going for. Either way it's a great design
05-30-2008, 12:42 AM #3
I think that it's great design for a magazine advertisement.
You brushed pretty much perfectly.
But here are the things that I think could be changed, but it's only my opinion:
-The green hands. I also feel that they don't "flow" with the color scheme going on.
-Some of the splatter brushing is a tad dirty. Meaning there are small splats that could be cleaned up a little on certain areas, like the top area of the twirl brushing. Right in the middle there are two | like lines that I think could go.
-The font for the website link doesn't exactly flow with the other font's used, so maybe use a different one that isn't hard to read either.
Other than that, I think it's great.
05-30-2008, 01:35 AM #4
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05-30-2008, 11:39 PM #5
Well pretty much i agree with the distraction of the hands in the center, ill see if i can remove it, it has to flow first with the rest of my group working with me since it is a group project, but they want creative input and credit doing no designing work , at least they can write the articles. Ill be making the modifications.
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